CARAMEL, CHOCOLATE, EBONY

This is my first Haiku- dedicated to African American History month

Desired color

Like wearing high fashion skin

Exclusive beauty

Reviews

[Millionth Muse]

Beautiful piece. The thing about this type of poetry is that they need to be both representative of distinct imagery, as well as follow a strict pattern...I think you captured that here. I would say this is probably more of a Senryu than a Haiku--because it follows the structure, but instead of being a piece about nature (which is 99% what Haiku does), it speaks of human things. Either way, really love it! Kudos to you!

[Gregory H.]

Really well written...

10/10

AA
Gregory

[Jane Doe]

AAWWWW I LOVE HAIKU'S THEY R AWESOME

[Andrew]

i love the imagery as well! good write

[Ali_Avery~7]

aww I love the imagry here nice job

[Glenn Davis]

Nice.

[QuothCorvid]

nicely done

[ICE]

Wonderful piece of work!!

[The Analog Kid]

Very nice, description to honor February!

[Kenny L. Mitchell]

Seductive, simplistic and oh so true. Very impressive!