Silence

Silence

Silence is all you'll hear from me

Silence is all i have to give

I gave all i ever had away

You never see me.

You only gave me,

The Silence of forgetting me.

When silence is all that i have

and all that i can give

Silence, forever holds me.

Author's Note

Quickly made this one up for a class.

Reviews

[Gregory Stires]

wow this poem is really awesome. you must have writing talent to have quicky made it up for a class. what i like about his poem is how it takes on to parts kinda of like a cause and effect. what caused the person to go silent was people ignoring them and basically forgetting their existance(thats what i think it sounds like) and the effect is the person going silent and their only companion is the silence and it will never let go.

[Mustansir Fazli]

The poem is good... But in my opinion (no offense) the real meaning of the poem is not quite comprehendable...
Otherwise the verses are nice