Shadow of the Sun

Shadow of the Sun

A Story by Silent Scribe
"

We live in your world, forever in the dark.

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Your vision is blurry, You hear explosions and gunfire.
"Get up man get the hell up!"
You rise Shakily not knowing what is going on or who is yelling at you.
"Come on man get up we got to get out of here before the Archangel gets here!"
Archangel did i just hear this man right archangel?
As you get on your feat you finally become aware of your surroundings.
The adrenaline finally kicks in.
Not caring who this man is that is yelling at you. You follow him running faster then you thought possible as blood curling screams fill the air. The air Seems heavy and smells of ash and smoke as all the noises of the battle suddenly cease. . . . 

© 2015 Silent Scribe


Author's Note

Silent Scribe
This is a rough version of the first few seconds at the beginning of a game that I am making .
Fair criticisms, and suggestions would be greatly appreciated.

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Added on March 29, 2015
Last Updated on March 29, 2015
Tags: Intro, Indie Game, In Development

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Silent Scribe
Silent Scribe

Salem, OR



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Play games then writes story lines for the game yep that's me can make up a story for everything. Told by most of my friends that i have a way with writing. more..

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