The Deprived

A biography/Autobiography of sorts.

The Deprived

Story of life at its hardest.

The Deprived - Part 1

In a place not so far away but just out of sight we will follow a boy, a everyday child.

Age - 6

He lives a happy life, such an innocent child not the tallest among his age nor the smartest but still intelligent. He lives in a small town, with a few good friends. Loved by almost everyone he meets.

Age - 7

Not much has changed in a year with our boy. though some things have changed. No longer is he loved by everyone. He met his first "bully", No this person doesn't physically harm him but mentally its a whole other story yet our boy is not defenseless for he as well could play these mind games and better at that. Even to the point were that bully thinks he is god at some point.

Age - 10

Our boy is no longer a complete child, and a new friend has entered the picture a girl at that. Yet our boy is no longer so innocent either. Words have become his weapons, yet he doesn't realize how sharp they actually are.

The Deprived - Part 2

Age 11

First day of middle school for our young man. He seems nervous but that soon changed to a confident almost cocky look, yet its fake he is still scared. No longer living in a small town he lost some friends and found some new ones.

Age 12

No longer a innocent young man our boy has a darker side and not the best group of friends. violence is constantly in his mind, yet there is still a fortress of fear and hate holding him together.

Age 14

He has finally broken and harmed another and feels no remorse. I feel we are losing him to the shadows. He talks to himself often another worrying sign. The next few years will be the hardest and most damaging to this young man.

The Deprived Part 3

Age 15

High school, The big bad wolves are out to play. not really, High school is a dream or at least for our boy it is. No longer with the same group of friends things are looking up for this young man but something is not as it seems with this boy.

Age 16

all is still the same but he seems lost in thought most of the time. about what i have no clue, but they are dark thoughts not happy ones.

Age 17

We had some close calls this year yet he always pulled through not sure how but i am very proud of him. he has met some true friends over these years and now we hope it all pays off.

Age 19

Over these two years everything has been smooth. High school is over and all is well. Most of those friend in high school are still friends and even comparable to family. No longer is he plagued by dark thoughts now he sees only happiness and a bright future.

I think now i can tell you our child's name since he is no longer a vulnerable child. His name is Nick..

This story ends at age 31 So don't go away Part 4 is yet to come.

Author's Note

Grammar is not my best so it will not be perfect. What do you think of the organization of the Story by age. The story is not finished aswell

Reviews

[becca]

This form is very interesting. When I first read it I was not sure if it was an outline for something you were interested in writing or not. The fact that it is a story is very unique. It reminds me of verse in some ways or a type of summarized journal. This is a neat piece though. Keep it up.

[Diana1]

Very truly said. Your style of writing is very innovative and fresh. Waiting for part 4.