Take me back

Take me back

A Poem by D'AsiaAlexis

Take me back to the good ole times, when we would be outside sunrise to sunset barefoot running in the dirt. The good ole times when falling out of a tree or off of a bike was our only form of hurt. The good ole times when we would be out all night crickets talking up a storm. Take me back to the good ole times, when every ten minutes you would hear the cars beep beep because, of the young smiling joyfully playing and, laughing faces would be filling up the streets of the neighborhood. I mean like sometimes twenty or more friends deep playing many different games from hopscotch, to double dutch, to red rover you name it. The good ole times when we didn't care about what someone had, their hair style, or the way they grin not even a little bit. Take me back to the good ole days when we loved because, of the love we have within . Take me back to the good ole days when we didn't care about the tone of the skin that our friend was in.Take me back to the good ole times, when we would be outside sunrise to sunset barefoot running in the dirt. The good ole times when falling out of a tree or off of a bike was our only form of hurt. The good ole times when we would be out all night crickets talking up a storm. Take me back to the good ole times, when every ten minutes you would hear the cars beep beep because, of the young smiling joyfully playing and, laughing faces would be filling up the streets of the neighborhood. I mean like sometimes twenty or more friends deep playing many different games from hopscotch, to double dutch, to red rover you name it. The good ole times when we didn't care about what someone had, their hair style, or the way they grin not even a little bit. Take me back to the good ole days when we loved because, of the love we have within . Take me back to the good ole days when we didn't care about the tone of the skin that our friend was in. 

© 2017 D'AsiaAlexis


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I love it, I agree with you. Especially the era we live in, take me back with you. I loved how you had the ability to get your point across all while being able to make the reader feel your feelings in this. Love it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

D'AsiaAlexis

7 Years Ago

Thank you very very much! It means a lot!
It sounds like you had a memorable childhood and indeed things seemed better when adults took care of the larger issues of life :) I can relate to your words. I.I.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

D'AsiaAlexis

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much! Yeah everything seemed so simple.
Isabella Ivy

7 Years Ago

It was my pleasure! :)

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Added on February 22, 2017
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