The Gods of Tiba

I'm a beginner in writing, and this is my first draft - so please excuse any typos/polish issues. I'd love to hear what you think about my writing and please be honest. Does it engage you? Do you want to know more? Is it creative/original? Is there enough dialog/description, or too much of either? Anything in particular stick with you or intrigue you? Anything else you notice? Thanks for reading!