Hints of a Subtle Nature

For yet another moment, I'm concerned

About a man from whom I've observed

Hints of a subtle nature of which I'm unsure.

I need to figure out what it means

When in conversing the other day he seemed

The slightest bit friendlier than before

And when he swiped aside my fallen hair

An electric touch thus far never shared

Something which I felt to my inner core.

More than ever, he meets my eyes thoughtfully

And without effort, a spell seems magically

Cast my direction with the intent to allure.

Then yesterday I engaged in random humor

And I heard what is his true laughter

One a little different in length than before.

Now I know my heart remains in conflict

So I wait and hope that his love be authentic.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

That electric touch sounds all promising. I very much enjoyed this composition. I found it subtle:) I think it deserves another poem in the future:)

Chris