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When

A Poem by sarahsbuddyohyeahman
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Just read it

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When

When you ask
Why
Why do you ask why
Is is because you want to know
Is it because you need to know
Is it vital information
life and death
Or is it because you are one of those self surrounding, annoying school girls who needs to know everything about every one and when you find out you be a d****e and spread the word to everyone as soon as possible
it's like the plague
it spreads and spreads
until it infects everything
and everyone
never stopping
not even slowing down
it keeps spreading until it kills the victim
and the only way to stop it is to kill the source
to kill the victim
that is when
when the gossip stops
and death goes back
back into it's cave
that is when


© 2013 sarahsbuddyohyeahman


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sarahsbuddyohyeahman
hope you like it

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I realy like it Donn-Avon!!! lol. I like the inclusion of death to remind us it's always there, hiding somewhere. Are you more of a rhymer or just a spoken word? Just for a little criticism work on a little bit of rhyme, maybe if that's what you like. Either way it was a good start! Keep writin, my name is on your profile, better be worth it :P

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I realy like it Donn-Avon!!! lol. I like the inclusion of death to remind us it's always there, hiding somewhere. Are you more of a rhymer or just a spoken word? Just for a little criticism work on a little bit of rhyme, maybe if that's what you like. Either way it was a good start! Keep writin, my name is on your profile, better be worth it :P

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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sarahsbuddyohyeahman
sarahsbuddyohyeahman

Oakland, CA



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I looove music, especially the drums and piano I also love to write and chat more..