The Great DragonsA Story by Cynthia Ann VaradyAn alternative creation story.“All right Chloe, hop up into bed,” Aunt Astrid said to her precocious niece. It was well past the little one's bedtime, and her usual enthusiastic personality was beginning to show cracks in its veneer. Chloe did as she was told, and nestled into the overstuffed down comforter and pillow. She stifled what must have been hundredth yawn of the evening and asked, “Well you tell me a story before you go?” Giving her sleepy niece a mock
frown, Aunt Astrid assented, and asked, “What would you like to hear?” “I want to hear about dragons!” Chloe shouted excitedly, almost launching herself out of her nest of blankets and pillows.
“OK, OK.” Aunt Astrid said calmly, holding her hands up in front of her in a vain attempt to quiet the child. “What kind of dragon story? I know several.” Without a moment's pause, Chloe replied, “One with beginnings.” “Interesting request. I think I know just the story.” Seating herself on the edge of Chloe's bed, Aunt Astrid began to tell the story of The Great Dragons. “Long ago, before humans roamed the earth, even before there were stars in the sky or planets spinning through black abyss of space, two great equal, yet opposite forces emerged from the ether. These forces called themselves Kahna and Theric. We know them as the Great Mother and Father Dragons. Out of nothing they appeared, traveling together for an eternity, spiraling through the nothingness in love's deep embrace.” “What does 'love's deep embrace' mean?” Chloe interrupted, snuggling deeper into her fluffy pillow. Her aunt considered this question for a moment and replied, “It's like a hug.” Chloe frowned, mulling this over. “Then why not just say hug?” she asked. “'Love's deep embrace' is more poetic.” This seemed to satisfy the bright second grader, and she nodded for her aunt to continue. “I'm surprised you didn't ask what ether was.” “I know what ether means. Great
Uncle Joe gave me that word on my spelling test last week.” Aunt Astrid nodded remembering her
father's spelling tests as a child. They were a weekly task during summer
vacation, and just like any other chore, they had to be completed before going
out to enjoy one's self in the summer sun. “Now, where was I?” “'Love's deep embrace',” Chloe answered helpfully. Smiling to herself, Aunt Astrid
continued, “Kahna and Theric spun through the nothingness in each others arms
in a swirl of emerald greens and sapphire blues, until one day Kahna belly,
full of eggs began to ache as its cargo strained against her lazuline abdomen.
She pulled away from her mate, clutching her abdomen in pain. Theric seeing
this, exhaled forth from him mighty lungs a great fireball for Kahna to deposit
her eggs. “What's lazuline?” Chloe inquired sleepily. “Blue. No more interrupting.” “Kahna circled around the ball of
fire, releasing egg after egg until all had been placed in their fiery nest
where they incubated. Shortly after laying her clutch, Kahna became tired and
sluggish. She took no pleasure in flying, she began to lose weight, and her
beautiful blue scales lost their luster. Just as Kahna closed her eyes for the
last time, the first of eggs began to hatch. Theric, filled with grief, held
Kahan's lifeless form tight as his arms, his tears running along her beautiful,
sparkling scales. Theirc's grief was too much for him to bare, and soon before
the first of his offspring was to emerge from the fire, he too died, clutching
onto his love. Together in death, they tumbled through the black emptiness of
space, forever spiraling. The first to emerge from its fiery
nest was Malik, a bright red dragon with fierce green eyes. Seeing his parents
spinning in a swirl of greens and blues, he flew to them. Soon to follow was a
much smaller orange dragon with a kind face and friendly eyes who called
herself Savil. Seeing her brother near to the bodies of their parents, she went
to his side to grieve with him. She was followed Maric, Tulic, and Galve, and
hundreds more. Together they all gathered around Theric and Kahah, mourning the
parents they would never know. Their tears fell upon the great
elder dragons, mixing with their father's and filled all the low areas to
created the first oceans. Their wings beats birthed the four winds whose
momentum began to move the pair towards the fireball where they fell into
orbit, circling and circling without end. Over
time, Theric and Kahna's bodies became the earth and the oceans. Their wings
became the mountains ranges. Their mouths vast, deep caverns. For an eon or
more, the young dragons enjoyed the world created by their parent's bodies.
Here they played, frolicked, and slept in complete happiness. Then one day,
Savil desired something more. She thought hard and channeled her longing,
creating the first plants, which would grow into majestic forests. Seeing what
their sister had done, the other dragons joined in. Maric created the animals
of the sea. Tulic produced the birds of the air. Galve, fashioned the beasts of
the land. Each dragon following suite until the earth was full of creatures
great and small, from the largest whale in the ocean to the smallest microbe
floating in the air. The young dragons looked over their
wonderful land, and were pleased with what they had created. However, one
dragon was not content. Malik, the firstborn looked over his siblings'
handiwork with his hard green eyes, and anger began to fill his heart. No
matter how hard he tried, Malik was unable to create anything. Jealousy began
to overtake him, and he grew to despise his brothers' and sisters' powers.
Determined to either destroy all they had created or rule over it all, Malik
began to turn his siblings against one another through deceit and subterfuge.
The end result was a war amongst the young dragons. One side led by Malik. The
other by, Savil. The battles were gruesome and
deadly, leaving none who participated untouched. The bodies of those who
perished became planets like their parents. Other became so consumed with rage
that they exploded in a brilliant flash of flames becoming suns like the one
from which they hatched. Scales shed on the battlefields became the stars,
sprinkling the night darkened sky with tiny pinpoints of light, shimmering
forever in the distance. Things went on this way for so long
that the dragons could scarcely remember the peaceful days they had once
enjoyed, until only Malik and Savil were left. All their brother and sisters
had lost their lives in the epic battles that had raged on for more than a millennia. Malik, sensing that his ambition to
rule over all the cosmos was at hand, cooked up a scheme to persuade his sister
to meet him near their favorite ocean where they played as children. There he
set a trap that would surely kill her. However, Savil knowing that she could
never trust a dragon that had sacrificed all of his siblings for power,
pretended to go along with Malik, suspecting that his arrogance would leave his
guard down, giving her the chance to strike. Savil was not disappointed by
Malik's pride, and as soon as his back was turned, she was on him, ripping at
his ruby scaled back and wings with her razor sharp claws and teeth. Malik
tried to dislodge Savil from his back, but she was too quick for him. Digging her claws in deeper, Savil
began to beat her wings fiercely, lifting her and Malik into the sky. Once they
were high enough to make the vast forests a green blur below them, Savil
released her grip. Malik began to fall, unable to make his ruined wings work
for him. He hit into the Earth with a mighty crash, blowing enough dust and
debris into the atmosphere that would block out the sun for a hundred
years. Malik's crumpled and destroyed body
lay at the bottom of a deep crater, his blood seeping into the soil. From this
mixture of soil and dragon blood emerged the first humans. Savil watched as a few
of these new humans wobbled on unsteady legs. She noticing the cool calculating
gleam in their eyes, and was reminded of Malik's thirst for power. Wanting to
add balance to human kind, Savil opened a vein in her arm, and rained blood
down upon Malik's broken body. The mixing of the their blood gave those yet to
emerge a conscience which the first had been lacking. Sighing at the horrors of the war and at the loss of her precious siblings, Savil flew high above the Earth until it was just a beautiful blue and green sphere spinning in the abyss and space, and curled herself into a ball to sleep. Her body can still be seen today in the night sky, keeping watch over her beautiful forests and all the creatures created by her wonderful brothers and sisters.” “It's sad that Malik never knew he could also create things like his brothers and sisters,” Chloe commented, half asleep. “Maybe he wouldn't have been so mean if he had known.” Kissing her sweet, astute niece's forehead, Aunt Astrid stood, turned off the bedside lamp, and quietly made her way out of the room. © 2014 Cynthia Ann Varady |
StatsAuthorCynthia Ann VaradyMOAboutCynthia Ann Varady is a multi genre writer and creator of the Pandemonium Cozy Mystery series. Book one, The Girl with the Uninvited Ghost, is available in ebook and print (Amazon). She earned her .. more..Writing
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