Wide awake.

I'm wide awake

My eyes can't see

every ounce

of your deceit.

 

I'm wide awake

so tell me how

i ever let you

bring me down.

 

I'm wide awake

full of fear

now i know

the end is near.

 

Bestill my heart

close your eyes

i finally see

through your disguise.

 

Next time i'll know

the risks you take

when you're dreaming

wide awake.

 

 

Reviews

[Charlie]

ahh,i love the last bit. "when you're dreaming,wide awake."

it`s really beautiful,the only thing i`ll say,is i think you should change it from "you`re" to "you are"

[Läin]

Great poem, just beautiful.

[Su' Nacnetaf]

Excellent writing, this piece is truly wonderful. I'd like to say more, but I'm speechless. Excellent!