drowning in Sorrow

drowning in Sorrow

A Poem by Pale Rose

drowning in Sorrow up to my chin,
It burrows deeper into the skin,
not allowing anymore Breath in.

as my eyes hardly dare to stare ahead,
i tread forward with feet of lead,
and inside me beats a heart of dread.

Time moves toward an inevitable Fate;
it hurts to say goodbye and it hurts to wait,
   lovers embrace always a little too late.

shrouded in darkness created from these pains,
in cold loneliness only the present remains,
and both past and future hold my heart in chains.

© 2011 Pale Rose


Author's Note

Pale Rose
This is not new, about 2+ years old actually. When I posted it here it had been revised from its original form. Version 2 is hopefully an improvement.

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Added on January 27, 2011
Last Updated on July 20, 2011
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Poetry is the ultimate expression of humanity. It is the only tool we have to express the depth of our emotions and suffering. As for my own, I see the dark side of life and find it beautiful. I seek .. more..

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