Only one little soul and little bits of love

Only one little soul and little bits of love

A Poem by Pale Rose

Only one little soul has I 
And I--I locked it deep inside 
    So we can all get along 
    And pretend that nothing's wrong.

Only little bits of love have I 
You threw--threw them by the wayside 
    Now replaced with dirt, 
    My little bits of hurt.

Only one little soul had I 
When my--my heart cage opened wide 
   Now rotted to black,
   I'll never get it back.

Only little bits of love had I 
For you--For you they've died 
    Left me hurting all the time
    Pain, all that's left of mine.

© 2013 Pale Rose


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Pale Rose
Just an interesting fact, this poem has won a contest on Writers Cafe :)

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'Only little bits of love had I
For you--For you they've died'

lovely light rhyme, fragile, soulful. pain is that sharp edge of sorrow but eventually it goes away. i was saddened by this but it has a lot of beauty to it as well- i enjoyed the poem on your authors page too and noted some similarities between this and that poem. fantastic.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pale Rose

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much! If I can write poetry that reminds you of Mr. Heine's then I am really flattere.. read more



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'Only little bits of love had I
For you--For you they've died'

lovely light rhyme, fragile, soulful. pain is that sharp edge of sorrow but eventually it goes away. i was saddened by this but it has a lot of beauty to it as well- i enjoyed the poem on your authors page too and noted some similarities between this and that poem. fantastic.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pale Rose

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much! If I can write poetry that reminds you of Mr. Heine's then I am really flattere.. read more

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Poetry is the ultimate expression of humanity. It is the only tool we have to express the depth of our emotions and suffering. As for my own, I see the dark side of life and find it beautiful. I seek .. more..

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