Insanity drops down...

Insanity drops down...

A Poem by Pale Rose
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The title is the first line.

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Insanity drops down with explosive words spoken.
The whole world's torn wide open,
And Love lies bleeding and broken.

Hard is the battering ram that opens your soul.
Echoing, spiraling down in a looping black hole,
The voice that meant all to you is losing control.

© 2008 Pale Rose


Author's Note

Pale Rose
Please tell me if this poem doesn't make sense to you or is confusing. What do you think it is trying to convey? By you telling me, I'll be able to tell if I'm getting across what I want to with this piece.

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To me it is the destruction caused by harsh thoughtless words spoken by someone you cared for.
You dare to raise your voice
to the one who gave you love
You are nothing but a dime store god
Hurling lightning from above
Now your church of one has gone away
There's no one left to fear your love.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Pale Rose
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Poetry is the ultimate expression of humanity. It is the only tool we have to express the depth of our emotions and suffering. As for my own, I see the dark side of life and find it beautiful. I seek .. more..

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