Sweet Little Revenge

This is a song I wrote with the help of a dear friend.

I feel I’m heading to that dark place,
The one where I can’t feel a thing,
I wanna let my, let my monster out
Out to play, out to play for a little while

I wanna feel the, feel the blood dance,
Into rivers that carry anger out
Cause when im gone I feel an emptiness,
I wanna liberate my feelings and let em out
I wanna liberate my feelings and let em out!

Sweet little revenge
Inside your slithering tongue
But you’re more of a mess
Despite my despite my try
I have reached, my final melting point
You drove me, to the point of no return!

I wanna see the rain of a thousand knives,
See the sun chopping down on our only lives
Cause when its all been said and its all been done,
I wanna feed my monster and let it out
I wanna feed my monster and let it out!

I sense I’m walking to that dark place,
Where the cross between the angels and devils dies
Yes the trees are green, but the soil is black,
They make me walk until my feet bleed
They make me walk until my feet bleed.

Reviews

[mynameisyou]

Enjoyed your poem.

[Perfect Mistake]

These would be a kick a*s song! Its amazing i loved it. Really shows some hateful revenge here. Good work on this song :3

[Max Hernz]

You can hear the song right here. Although, just an acoustic notion at the moment, I plan on completing it soon.

https://soundcloud.com/skidharxen-vilhelmina/sweet-little-revenge