Before Freedom

I see your face within my light. The smile that splits your lips.
Your ever changing mood does sway my heart from its own little quips.
I want to show you it's not so bad. That life can begin anew.
That sometimes you can find a love that will not reject you.
My friend, you are so special. You deserve oh, so much more.
You are so very sad, I know, but soon your heart will soar.
Take heed of my words my friend. I tell you from my heart.
That soon you will delight in the freedom from being apart.

Reviews

[Liza]

you're a very insightful and talented mind
I enjoyed this expression, it flowed like a conversation
of one loving and uplifting heart telling another not to long for things that hurt
the friend wants to be the catalyst to make another see themselves in another light yet the one that lives in their own skin is stuck in underserving mode
every line was concentrated with emotion and profound intelligence of the heart

[Cyanthinnis]

Thank you. :)