failing

i give up..

cant take it no more

already failing..

so what can i do..

what the point in doing work,

whats the point if you cant pass your class..

so why shouold i wast my time

another year in the 11th grade:(

oh what fun

Reviews

[Mak Goalie]

plz write some poetry on teenage.my special request

[Mak Goalie]

wowwwwwwwwwwwwww........u just write wat im always looking for..........i have also passed 11..ths year........

[Coyote Poetry]

School can be hard. A little tutoring is good to have. All of us need help in life. Sometime better to seek help then to give up. A poem with a lot of frustration. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[selkietales]

Just keep telling yourself, "I think I can I think I can!" like Thomas the engine, and you will be okay. Here are some tips to pass Language Arts: i is I when referring to yourself; it's "waste," not "wast"; you need an apostrophe in the word can't; "cant take it no more" should have "anymore" rather than "no more"; it's "should"; and "whats" needs an apostrophe. However, despite these small errors, the poem was enjoyable.

[Pencrafter]

For some reason this strikes me as funny. It describes the frustration and stress of studying and trying to pass a test. Fact is, the striving and testing is actually a big part of the learning process. I failed college algebra three times. But now I can comprehend and explain some of the theories and equations. Anyway, your poem is short and to the point. Keep writing.