do i
A Poem by
Spice
lots of questions
do i know you,
no i don't,
do i love you,
yes i do,
are you mine,
yes you are,
do i love you,
yes i do,
© 2012 Spice
Reviews
A very short poem. But you made your point. Love is simple when two people have the same desire. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote
Posted 12 Years Ago
I like this. It allows the reader to ponder and expand.
Posted 12 Years Ago
I like this. It allows the reader to ponder and expand.
i agree you with you 100%
Posted 12 Years Ago
i agree you with you 100%
Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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Your poem here has a simple, catchy rhythm in short, sweet lines. I like the way you offer a question and then the answer. I don't know if there are such things--I'm no poet or literature professor--but I like to call these 'pocket poems'. On the content, I would think that you can't really love someone unless you really know them. It's a simple commentary on basic human love.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Your poem here has a simple, catchy rhythm in short, sweet lines. I like the way you offer a question and then the answer. I don't know if there are such things--I'm no poet or literature professor--but I like to call these 'pocket poems'. On the content, I would think that you can't really love someone unless you really know them. It's a simple commentary on basic human love.
kinda authoritative on a stranger........
Posted 12 Years Ago
kinda authoritative on a stranger........
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Added on May 15, 2012
Last Updated on May 15, 2012