whats going on

whats going on

A Poem by Spice
"

your my one and only

"
whats going on with you
whats going on here
why can't i do anything right 
chorus
why am i a failure
at every thing i do
why cant i do any thing right
why i couldn't i keep u happy
hook
the love of my life,
i ruined it all,
between you and me
i probably can't ever have a second chance,
i lost you forever
never going to get you back,
although i hope i do
cause i don't know what i'd with out you
chorus 2
if i got you back i'd be the happiest, 
girl in the world, 
if i got yo back,
if i got you back,
i wouldn't let you go,
i wouldn't let you down,
cause you are my one true love,
baby believe me,
you are my one and only,
for ever my love. 
repeat chorus 

© 2012 Spice


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Nice flow of words and thoughts in the poem. I like the way you directed the reader to the chorus. No weakness in the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


thanks:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Stirring and imagery is still, well done, good read.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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