sorrow

can you feel the sorrow

in the wind the sorrow creeps,

in your heart the sorrow grows,

in your mind the sorrow never goes,

in your thoughts the sorrows near,

in your hands the sorrows gone,

in my heart is where you are,

in my heart is where you stay,

can't stand to watch you leave,

it breaks my heart ,

when we part. and go our separate ways,

i sit down to write you a poem,

but all that comes out is misery 

i wish i could be different,

but with me sorrow will always stay

Reviews

[Spice]

yes it is sad but thats who i am..all my stuff is based on me

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful and sad poem. Good to release sorrow to paper. Help a little. Nice flow of thoughts in the poem. A sad ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Spice]

:)

[Rusty]

Well felt emotion and nicely constructed.