weak

what happened

you look so weak,

fragile,and beaten,

what have they done to you my beautiful..

why is this happening,

do you even know

i got know clue at all

maybe you can help

think back to when it all happened,.

don't over think it

it's horrible what people do these days,.

can't breath,

all shaky,

tuning everyone out 

blocking the sound of voices around her

trying to forget everything that has happend,.

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"i got know clue at all
maybe you can help
think back to when it all happened,.
don't over think it"
Being weak is one of many emotion we will know in a life. The meek supposedly will control the world one day? Hard to forget pain and weakness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Rusty]

A touching and poigniant write. I would look at the punctuation and spelling to make what is a beautifully crafted poem soar to even further heights.

[PetiteGemini]

Very sweet, yet sad. I really liked this. Keep it up :) ♥