black whole

how my life onse was

thinking back on the past

when life wasn't to well

remembering all the sad parts,

and none of the good

thinking back on the past

when all i did was cry,

not a smile in site,

if you saw me now 

you wouldn't even recognize me

don't you see,

people change for 

better and worse

it all depends on you

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true in this poem.
"don't you see,
people change for
better and worse
it all depends on you"
We control our thoughts good and bad. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Spice]

thank you

[joshua deathdealer]

Very true and well written.

[Rusty]

Well said. Keep up the good work and by all means keep writing

[PetiteGemini]

This poem is so true. How a person turns out DOES depend on how they have grown and what has happened in your life. Very well done.

[Spice]

unfortunately all the stuff i write a bought is based on me and my life.when i was growing up i didn't have a great life. now that i'm a little older than i was back then life is getting better..i'm in 11Th grade and haven't been held back yet.. so yes life has gotten better