can you see

can you see

A Poem by Spice
"

a girl with a broken heart

"
can you see the pain in my eyes,
when you say you got to go,
with no explanation what so ever,
your out that door.

i run to my room,
can't stop the tears,...
that you caused,
do you realize what you've done,
you broke a heart,
i'm sure its not you r first

when will you learn,
that girls arnt toys
can't just use them,
till you get board

© 2012 Spice


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Good to set the rules before falling in a relationship. Some men use and abuse. Some love and appreciate. Option of the girl? I like the flow of thoughts and the strong ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is so true. This is how most boys can be. I wish that they weren't, but what can we do? Great job, babe

Posted 12 Years Ago



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