there's a bitter pill to swallow, but i suppose that's why life seems a tainted apple in our gardens of edan, great to look at, but horrible to experience.
So image heavy and smoothly written. I can relate to this one a lot. Perhaps there's a lot to say about the narrator, perhaps the nightmare is symbolic of their life. Maybe I'm thinking too deeply about a poem I really admire and should just enjoy it.
*wrong form of "its"
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
No, you would be correct in assuming so, but I over think things much too often myself.. Either way,.. read moreNo, you would be correct in assuming so, but I over think things much too often myself.. Either way, thank you. Oh and thanks for the correction, I'll surely fix it.
I wonder what people would pick if given the choice of a dragon's stare in front of them or in the middle of a war zone!! : ) A dragon's fire always made me curious to wonder how that would feel. Maybe like a warm breeze for a nanosecond or maybe we would just see red and .....POOF!! Gone. lol I like your poem, Cwortknee. xoxo -Mark
That would be cool to have a setting on a microwave that is for "dragon"!! : )
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
I would much prefer the dragon over a war zone. At least then I will have seen something magical. Pr.. read moreI would much prefer the dragon over a war zone. At least then I will have seen something magical. Probably, so. Thank you! I agree. haha
Cleverly done, waking up from a nightmare to reality, like the saying goes, "Out of the frying pan, into the fire", this rings true here...great work!!
My favorite poems by Robert Frost:
Nothing Gold Can Stay-
"Nature's first green is gold,
Her hardest hue to hold.
Her early leaf's a flower;
But only so an hour.
Then leaf subsides to leaf.
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