Autumn's Essence

Her burlesque display
exposing risqué branches;
Autumn's grand reveal

Reviews

[Bare Trees]

Great way of looking at autumn. You've personified it in a way I never would have thought of. Great writing.

[Cwortknee]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to review.

[Bare Trees]

No problem, you're very good.

[Cwortknee]

Ah, don't make me blush!

[Bare Trees]

haha, I won't, but you really are good, I'll be reading more from you again sometime. :)

[Cwortknee]

Thank you, I'd appreciate that. (:

[Bare Trees]

:))

[Circe]

wow... perfect imagery... it leaves such a beautiful taste.. sensual, feminine, flamboyant, it says something about form and nature, bringing it to life.. one of the best haikus I've read.

[Cwortknee]

Such kind words! I'm so very flattered. Thank you for taking the time to review!

[rnuff]

Beautifully amazing!!
Love this

[Cwortknee]

What a compliment! Thank you so much!

[Jack Reaper]

quite a beautiful haiku of my favorite season. great job.

[Cwortknee]

Thank you so much!

[Sid]

Wow this is beautiful, short and sweet. By the way I have to say the words added by Nicholas Bernard Rowe add a new dimension to your poem...great work, both of you actually!!

[Cwortknee]

Thank you! Don't they though? (:

[Tex]

oh wow... I just love this.

100/100

but soon she'll be covered
with a translucent veil of-ice
and gorgeous white coat

(see how clumsy I am, compared to you)

[Cwortknee]

Thank you so much! You're not clumsy. That's quite fitting, actually. (:

[Tex]

my mind keeps coming back to this poem...

rolling around in my head is spring as a child, summer as a teen young adult, autumn as you have written it, winter as old age the creaking of branches the squeaking of snow beneath your feet everything slows in the cold ... kinda thing...

The sign of a truly great write!

I am haunted by it for days after reading it.

Keep up the great work!

[Cwortknee]

Oh, wow. That is such an honor. I'm so very flattered. Thank you!