Autumn's Essence

Her burlesque display
exposing risqué branches;
Autumn's grand reveal

Reviews

[Krithika Raghavan]

Your haiku display
Exposing "budding" talent
Even in autumn;-)

[Cwortknee]

Oh, goodness! Thank you. xD I think this is my first review in haiku form.

[Max Watt]

So brief, yet so much to look into. I keep reading it over and over. Every word is wonderfully placed. I'm tempted to take it apart and examine each of them but that would destroy the magic. This must be shared with the world!

[Cwortknee]

Wow, thank you. You have no idea how much I appreciate such kind words. I'm flattered, really.

[Ban Heo]

I love this. Its so condensed that a reading of it has to be done along with the title. They both work well with each other and you manage (i'm jealous) to get across a very vivid emotion in this poem. Great job.

[Cwortknee]

Thank you so very much. That's very flattering!

[Sam]

I love this! Fall is my favorite season and in my head she's always been sort of flirtingly coy and then all the sudden brazen with her colors and falling leaves, your poem embodies that feeling perfectly. The first line is my favorite.

[Cwortknee]

Thank you so much! The first line was the most effortless for me, and my favorite as well.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That first line is really brilliant, burlesque display, I love it... certainly my favorite season, it is a color splendor and such beautiful weather.

[Cwortknee]

Thank you so much!

[Hamza]

an artistic nature to present nature in the simplest and exquisite manner ...
i'd say this is a complete poetry ... and the way you have put forth this explanation ..
marvelous thinking ..
short yet complete .. :)

[Cwortknee]

Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate the review!

[Markus Anthony]

"burlesque"
Whatta description. Thank you for this.

[Cwortknee]

Thank you for the read!

[Meallea Pomorette]

Nice personification... It's short but I really like it...
I really like reading haikus and this one makes it to my list...
The mood is perfect for me... Keep writing!!!

[Cwortknee]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! Sure thing.

[Talal Hussain]

that is one of the most creative work i have seen so far...great job :-)

[Cwortknee]

Thank you so much!

[DrD]

This brief work demonstrates the need for the economy of words to make it work and you did that magnificently.

[Cwortknee]

Thank you DrD, you are too kind!