Expedition

Under ominous sky
we're cast out to sea.
To undergo trial
is our destiny.
Our inferior vessel
carries us through.
Knowing our fate,
we bravely pursue.
The waters ahead
are not very forgiving..

Ultimately, that's the beauty in living.

Reviews

[Sid]

Great write, it is short but it speaks volumes. The message this poem presents is something we can all be inspired from, we should hold fast no matter the circumstances for that is the joy of living...great words!!

[Cwortknee]

Thank you so much!

[DrD]

In its simplicity, this writing becomes appealing. Terse and compact, it deals with one of the most profound themes of philosophy and does it quite well. I liked this.

[Cwortknee]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

[Jack Reaper]

simply beautiful. and really a great message about pursuing through the unexpected and choppy waters. its what make us who we are. such is the beauty in living. great job.

[Cwortknee]

Thank you so very much for the kind words! I appreciate the review.

[Jack Reaper]

youre most welcome

[zainul]

You experienced beauty in living and expressed so nicely.
Well penned.
Enjoyed reading.
100/100

[Cwortknee]

Thank you so much, I'm very glad that you enjoyed!

[zainul]

You are welcome.
Keep on sharing such good work.