Expedition

Under ominous sky
we're cast out to sea.
To undergo trial
is our destiny.
Our inferior vessel
carries us through.
Knowing our fate,
we bravely pursue.
The waters ahead
are not very forgiving..

Ultimately, that's the beauty in living.

Reviews

[Max Watt]

This just altered my outlook on life. Thank you.

[Cwortknee]

Oh my, what a compliment! Thank you kind sir.

[Maegan]

I loved this. It secretly shows issues in life but bravely shows it's true colors.

[Cwortknee]

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. Your compliments are much appreciated.

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully penned, with positivity for what lies ahead.

[Cwortknee]

Thank you for the kind words and I appreciate you taking the time to read and review!

[Droll Prole]

I like this a lot, life wasn't meant to be easy, it would be boring if it was.

[Cwortknee]

Wouldn't it though? Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review!

[MOON]

Well crafted deep write. Our inferior vessel indeed and that is the beauty of life.

[Cwortknee]

Thank you so much for taking the time to review!

[Saleem Little]

How can one truly appreciate prosperity without first facing adversity. I can totally relate.

[Cwortknee]

Thanks for taking the time to review, and well said!

[stimey]

blatant optimism typically gives me a nose bleed, but i like this. thick imagery, blunt, short, i dig it.

[Cwortknee]

Haha, thank you. I am glad I didn't give you a nosebleed.

[Bare Trees]

Well said, a fitting metaphor for life.

[Cwortknee]

Thank you!

[Markus Anthony]

Indeed the beauty in living is how it hones us to become keen sailors who set forth in the vast current, where mighty wind blows. I admire your style, its like painting a whole picture. Imagery 100/100

[Cwortknee]

Thank you so very much! I appreciate the lovely review.

[Tex]

My god... I'm am becoming a raving fan of yours... Another amazing write. How do you do it? so clean, so clear, so undeniably true, with a depth that can not be sounded (if I may use a sailors term).

100/100

I have only given that score once before and I think it was for your Autumn's Essence piece...

[Cwortknee]

You are just too kind. The reviews that you have given me are the most flattering ones I've ever had. Thank you so much for making my day.