She Is Earthy

She has the depth of oceans,
Her motives are mountains;
Every man's swayed by her charm.

If you can imagine raw beauty, that's her.
She's surely a goddess amongst swine.

Reviews

[Danny Sanchez]

This is beautifully written my favorite line is her motives are mountains :)

[Cwortknee]

Thank you! It's my favorite too. =]

[The Nude Writer]

Lovely poem :) the last line is golden :)

[Cwortknee]

Why, thank you ma'am! I appreciate that you took the time to read and comment. (:

[Max Watt]

The image is right in front of me straight away. Then it's built upon more and more with each line. I'm intrigued by the break after line 3, it seems so intentional somehow, and I can't figure out why it has such an effect. Well done, I'm becoming a fan pretty rapidly.

[Cwortknee]

I appreciate you taking the time to review my poems, you really are too kind.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

What an unique way to describe a down to Earth woman.

Her motives are mountains

Brilliant!!

[Cwortknee]

Thank you so much!

[Sam]

I love the first three lines, but especially "her motives are mountains', it immediately makes this woman fantastically majestic, well done.

[Cwortknee]

Thank you so much! That's my favorite line as well. (: