I wonder if readers might miss the Key words, the font does not let you highlight them well, have you thought of making them a different color?
Love the Modify, Convert, Transform, Adapt, Create (i am not sure "satisfy" belongs in that group, but leave that to you) they give the process needed to Transform.
very clever, love the brevity, gives a clear message in quick punch.
you continue to surprise me with stuff like this.
a great read, love your style, keep it up.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
I take so much joy in your reviews! Thank you. I appreciate the advice, I will definitely edit it ri.. read moreI take so much joy in your reviews! Thank you. I appreciate the advice, I will definitely edit it right away! No, satisfy doesn't quite fit the theme. I'll leave that one out of the color change. As always, I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poetry! You truly inspire confidence.
I wonder if readers might miss the Key words, the font does not let you highlight them well, have you thought of making them a different color?
Love the Modify, Convert, Transform, Adapt, Create (i am not sure "satisfy" belongs in that group, but leave that to you) they give the process needed to Transform.
very clever, love the brevity, gives a clear message in quick punch.
you continue to surprise me with stuff like this.
a great read, love your style, keep it up.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
I take so much joy in your reviews! Thank you. I appreciate the advice, I will definitely edit it ri.. read moreI take so much joy in your reviews! Thank you. I appreciate the advice, I will definitely edit it right away! No, satisfy doesn't quite fit the theme. I'll leave that one out of the color change. As always, I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poetry! You truly inspire confidence.
My favorite poems by Robert Frost:
Nothing Gold Can Stay-
"Nature's first green is gold,
Her hardest hue to hold.
Her early leaf's a flower;
But only so an hour.
Then leaf subsides to leaf.
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