Your Eyes

Your Eyes

A Poem by Elizabeth Marie

Two eyes,
Beautiful,
And dark,
How,
How can these beautiful,
Sweet eyes,
Hurt me,
So much,
Just by,
Looking,
How,
How can they,
Make me feel,
Like a ghost,
Like I don't,
Even exist.

© 2011 Elizabeth Marie


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Elizabeth Marie
i really don't know

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You've managed to evoke alot of emotion, I love it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


such a sad write, I've felt this way before.

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Posted 13 Years Ago


Truly a sadly beautiful write.
the 6th line "sweet" instead
of (sweat)

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Posted 14 Years Ago


interesting way of breaking it up...
very nice though!
I think I know what/WHO you are referring to... ;)

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Posted 14 Years Ago


That's so sad. I've felt like that before. I liked it.;p

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Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on March 29, 2010
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Elizabeth Marie
Elizabeth Marie

Southwest Harbor/ Bar Harbor, ME



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