~Dreams Unconcealed~

A sonnet

Small thoughts thinking on how lucky my wish,

To be allowed the vision of your dreams,

I care not for another or such relish,

A virgin pondering, so love esteemed.

That caring knows my belief is so true,

Me being sight blessed as a man could be,

Crowned on his throne, two jewels aqua blue,

Then turquoise their colour I’d really see.

Yet green is shone lushness, verdure is shown,

Changes shine bright; you light splendours I feel,

Emeralds reflect, the wonder I own,

This coming vibrance; your beauty revealed.

A large muse perceiving, defining, sealed,

Honoured, my darling, our dreams unconcealed.

 

Reviews

[NormaZ]

Beautiful poem! I love the sentiment in the poem of love, loving, and gratitude.

[WindSong]

Reading a second time. Your talent as a gifted poet shines through in this beautiful poem!

[WindSong]

Beautiful words of love for another. Romantic and dreamy! I loved it. Great poem Rob. It's nice reading your work again!

WindSong

[Debby Carlson]

Lovely, romantic in a sweep me away type moment. Beautiful work. Beautiful images with the colors that flowed with your words. I am so glad I stopped by Rob.

[Elaenor Aisling]

Wonderful! I particularly love the last line and the way it matches so well with the previous two. A lovely sonnet.

[annie minus]

Excellent poem Rob, such great attention to detail - I love how the shining colours come through and that last line is stunning. Annie :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

An exquisite sonnet. Emeralds reflect, the wonder I own........your beauty revealed.....so lovely!

[Peggy Gildon]

What beautiful descriptive colors. Lovely flow. Sounds like aura's are all around your love.

[John Faulkner]

Very beautiful Rob..You write of the essence of love in delicate, almost sensual expression. A truly lovely sonnet..It warms my heart..

I have no idea what the ratings and points mean?? SORRY!!


JOHN