Trapped

this poem is based around my feeling and emotions towards my gender issues. Of which i am still scared to sort out, i am aware they are there and seeing help but something holds me back.

I wonder darkly in my own mind
No candles hope to light my way
Trapped in twisted twilight
Barbed boarder line my home to stay
The cruel wires softly twine
In a deathly embrace to flesh
The tearing pain too much to bare
Holding my soul in its place
The hurtful fear blocks my way
Deep feelings of no escape
To tired of wishing strongly
For the strength I lose each day
So defeat me my sorrow
let my tears weep blood
For soon the day will come
When endless nights my home
Bleed me dry if you have mercy
Cruel twilight bleed my soul
Let this pained traveler find rest
Let she find her true form

Reviews

[Liz-z]

"Deep feelings of no escape
To tired of wishing strongly
For the strength I lose each day
So defeat me my sorrow"
Really like those lines; it just catches my full attention.

"Bleed me dry if you have mercy
Cruel twilight bleed my soul"
Very odd, dark, work you've got here. Which makes it beautiful... Bravo, I must add, Bravo! :O

"The tearing pain too much to bare
Holding my soul in its place"
I had to come back to these lines also; there's something about it that people might say they can relate to, but can they really?

[Isha Ethera]

intense feelings... even reading this... I hope she finds her true form as she should