The Dream I Shan't Forget

For those that love to dance, I think you'll understand this one :)

The night’s become a dimmer glow of dots;

They’re swirling, turning, spinning, churning round,

No sights the norm, or beats or storms could top .

This rhythmic flow of sound does shake the ground

And linger tunes of upbeat waves of rock,

While thunder strikes a stormy night inside;

Without the rain, the screams and sounds are mocked;

This wild jungle has no shelter nigh.

Then heat to steam, and pleasant dreams are met,

Of starry nights and candle lights aglow;

The waves drift slow, onto a sun’s last set,

As darkness, calm, does fall upon the show;

Against the storm I rest my head on that,

The moments of a dream I shan’t forget.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"This wild jungle has no shelter nigh.
Then heat to steam, and pleasant dreams are met,
Of starry nights and candle lights aglow;"
You are a amazing writer. The complete poem I enjoyed. The above lines I liked the most. Dance and freedom. They walk hand in hand. Good to escape to places of pleasure. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Mazie]

Again, Thank you very much ^^ I'm really happy you enjoyed it and I appreciate the support :) And I agree, I am finding now especially that I need to take more time to just let loose and have fun with all the stressors of daily life

[Beccy]

My immediate personal connection and interpretation to this was a sense of being inside in a club.
'The night's become a dimmer glow of dots,' (the lights,) dancing to the frenetic beat of rock/heavy metal, (the rhythmic flow of sound,) whilst outside, the storm clouds and thunder rage with all the awesome power of nature; (thunder strikes a stormy night outside.) Then suddenly the turn comes, heat to steam, the starry night, the calming of the storm and the music dying away allowing the narrator to rest and dream.

It is very good indeed.

Beccy.

[Mazie]

thank you so much for your review ^^ you're spot on :)

[Blogger]

I am glad you mentioned the part about dancing in the beginning or this wouldnt have made as much sense to me. I love to dance as well. Its exciting and colorful as you say. The rain and the darkness just add to the experience dont they?

Well done.

[Mazie]

Yes, I was worried people might not understand it, but basically just describing a dance, from fast music, to like a slow dance towards the end :) The rhythm/imagery was meant to help give that feeling, I'm not sure if it did or not. And yes, I agree :)
Thank you very much for reviewing/commenting! :)

[Blogger]

It is my pleasure. You appear to be more advanced and that is a bit humbling.

[Mazie]

I don't know about that, I just let flow whatever I feel/happens to come out :) but thank you very much ^^