Why can't it be now?

Why can't it be now?

A Poem by Curls
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This is not much. I just wrote what I felt.

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I wonder how pain leaves.
I wonder how freeing that will be.
I wonder how long this will take.
Why can't it be now?

I hope life will turn for my favor.
I hope chance will be mine again.
I hope intimacy won't feel so far.
Why can't it be now?

I wish there was an easier way out.
I wish dreams are enough to heal.
I wish death should be part of the solution.
Why can't it be now?

I know life is hard for everyone.
I know chances come from trust.
I know the easy way is also the hard way.
Why is everything too late?

© 2016 Curls


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Curls
Hope y'all like it.

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Good poem brought down by a couple lines. "I wish there's an easier way out." should be I wish there WAS an easier way out. "I wish death can be.." should be "I wish death could be..." "I wish distance wasn't so far." just doesn't make sense, distance isnt a location, it can't be far. I see potential, I see insight, you just screwed up a few lines. its a 73 right now has potential to reach the 90s if you fix those lines, I liked it until I saw the screw ups.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Curls

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the insights. I'll fix the mistakes. ☺



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Good poem brought down by a couple lines. "I wish there's an easier way out." should be I wish there WAS an easier way out. "I wish death can be.." should be "I wish death could be..." "I wish distance wasn't so far." just doesn't make sense, distance isnt a location, it can't be far. I see potential, I see insight, you just screwed up a few lines. its a 73 right now has potential to reach the 90s if you fix those lines, I liked it until I saw the screw ups.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Curls

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the insights. I'll fix the mistakes. ☺

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Added on June 26, 2016
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Curls
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Las Pinas City, National Capital Region, Philippines



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