I very much like this. I love the language you have used, as well as the metaphors. it is something i think that a lot of people can relate to, and i agree that it really does have an overwhelming sense of loneliness.
that's a nice poem ,an illusion he made about a girl he wants who no longer stay by his side. Still wishing the girl that once left him behind. That's loneliness I guess.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you for the review. :) I agree, that's loneliness.