Amour

I feel you making me weaken,

Each brick inside falling from the wall

You have me slowly crumbling,

Unstitching at the seams with your every touch.

 

      You delicately peel these layers away,

                           Gently unwrapping who I am.

                               I adore listening to you, hypnotized

          To the whispers of your truths,

                          The honesty of your lies.

 

I wish to luxuriously retire,

to the chambers of your heart,

Trickling through the cracks of your soul.

You have won the battle, my love

Like a true chevalier en armure étincelante,

You have set me free, no longer a hostage.

 

                        For the rest of these days, 

                             You are mine,

                 As I am yours

                           In this wonderland. 

Reviews

[reflectingus]

I love how much description and feelings you put in your poems. This is so romantic and strikes me with its immense beauty.

[Alice]

So beautifully written. I can't find much else to say. Just beautiful. :)

[Jaslin K]

these words created a very vivid picture and gave it a little fantasy feel to it. really nice

[Eagle Cruagh]

This is an exciting and arousing
writing. Your talent is outstanding/.
Your gift amazing,
I look forward to reading more of
you.
Eagle Cruagh

[eatmills]

Interesting metaphors lead to interesting imagery. Thank you for sharing this with me. I really enjoyed the way you made the words dance upon my screen.

[Alexandra Todorovic]

It's really beautiful and warm feeling when you feel this way! I love how you combine those words :))) Great job and keep up the good work!

[Charile]

I loved it. I could really relate. Great job

Oooh Alice, what a nice poem! " To the whispers of your truths, The honesty of your lies, and for these days, you both are in wonderland... I like all the facets of "amour" you name... Good job!

[Jibey]

A pleasing image that nicely complements the words, with their reflective delight and sense of pleasure in finding the release of love, the confidence and trust of the intimate room where no secrets are hidden...