Seperation, of the seperate lives.

A kiss is delicate and simple,

Without  the love and lies.

That tempting smile with a dimple,

Hides the fangs in your disguise.

I wish that I could tell you,

I never planned it at all.

I wish you could understand how,

Hard it was for me to fall.

 

I know there is a hate and anger,

Swirling in your pride.

I know from the truth,

You choose to deny and hide.

The hurting that you’re feeling

Is forever my burden and guilt

You’ll never realize the amount of blood,

I have painfully spilt.

To take it all back,

I know I wouldn’t.

To go back to what it was,

Inside I know I couldn’t.

I choose to steal,

A sunrise over a sunset.

To live a life,

 I won’t fear or regret.

Reviews

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Very beautifully expressed , your language is rich and I could fully relate to your words , there is no point to stay when love faded ... I know you will move on , but also love that you wait a min . looking back on your former love and understand his feelings

[Distant horizons]

No regret, yeah. great write

[Lina Grey]

Interesting poem. I like how it starts to rhyme, but loses the pattern and goes into a free verse style. Also how it contradicts itself a bit, "the hurting that you're feeling inside Is forever my burden and guilt" then "To take it ll back, I know I wouldn't" and "To live a life I won't fear or regret." It's very realistic and wholistic towards true emotions. Thank you.

[Moflo]

Nice expression, it flows very well and portrays a nice sense of emotion. Good work.

[Jibey]

Clever... you used rhyme well in the first two verses and then broke the rhythm in the final verse to break out into the freedom you wanted and needed...

[Emily]

I really like your rhyming here, it really helps the poem get its emotions out!:)