give

and oh what i would give to be tangled
souls mangled, estranged and endangered
to liquefy and deny the parts of one another that we so need to be stroked, and consoled,
to pacify to the brokenness in you for a better you, for a better me, for a better we

Reviews

[JC]

This read like a chorus to a song to me, lyrical and saying much, a feeling and vision we can all relate to, but also that mystique and voyeuristic peering into another's soul.

[KCthelastboyscout]

Not much to write but so much to say.divinely written.you want love so much and I understand completely

[Justin]

that was very emotional in short form :) great job :)