Sacrifice

Am
I easy to forget or replace? Loving you feels like motion sickness but I'm
standing still, I'm a waste. You talk but when you crack open I swear you think
I'm her. Maybe I'm one of them, the ones that don't deserve safety or security,
that don't deserve loyalty or companionship. Maybe I will always only be worthy
of being estranged and split open into the image of an evil vindictive
casualty. Perhaps, I am the sacrifice so easily made by many.

Author's Note

lemme know your thoughts

Reviews

[Robert Parlange]

The speaker seems to be in the early part of a relationship. That feeling of uncertainty is expressed cleverly with "feels like motion sickness but I'm standing still." Good imagery. The insecurity of the speaker is presented well by the writing.

If this is personal, hang in there. Relationships don't have to be painful.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Powerful emotions toward one's self, yet depression and feelings of self worth is such a major problem these days, apparently for everyone, and i do mean apparently. I don't know about the kind of people that would make you feel that way. Nicely written, very powerful. Tyfs.

[Nismo]

I had to read this one a couple of times before I got my judgement ready. I think it is good, it sums up the feeling of not being special perfectly.