Flowers

Flowers are like angels, floating on clouds.

Flowers are like droplets of rain, tiny and delicate.

Flowers are like butterflies, alive throughout the year.

Flowers are like mothers, caring for the ones in need.

Flowers are the most precious things...

Flowers, flowers, flowers.

Reviews

[Sunny]

I love your description of what flowers are and what they symbolise. Great work.
:)

[Insanity]

It's a more kind of like gentle, slower poem, with a nice clear meaning in it.

It's just that I feel like (LOL) you may have overused phrase 'Flowers are like'. Change it to something more like, "Flowers are the..." blah blah blah... Or something, maybe? You can never really have too many similes, but about the same thing, five times in a row, it just feels a bit much. xP

It's well written though, the ending was nice (oh an about the ending, you know how you have the '...' maybe for the ending you could put a space between the second last line and the last line). It was a lovely poem to read out and et cetera, et cetera, et cetera and so on, lots of fluff about how great it was otherwise and... my review basically means,

"It was good, but you could improve on it. Change some of the similes to metaphors or something. Ending was great, but maybe put a space between the second line and last line. The end."