What are you going to do now

What are you going to do now

A Poem by Wild Rose
"

Just retired and planning to go traveling in a camper van

"

Newly retired

"What are you going to do now? The mobile hair dresser asked

"We are going to buy a motor home and go travelling"

The questions came quickly

 

"Where will you go" she asked

"Any place we can go on four wheels

We are booked for a holiday in Spain and Portugal

After Christmas" I replied

 

How will you get there;

How do you know which road to take

Where will you eat

Who will cook for you

Where will you buy the food

How will you get your camper across to Spain

Do you all meet up and travel together

The questions came fast

 

No we travel alone and meet up

Some people go in September and stay until May 

We have a road map

The roads have numbers and signs like in UK

We will go to a supermarket

My wife will cook in  the camper we have and oven an hot rings

We will take the boat from Portsmouth

 

They went on chartered tours

Air port by transport provided

And to the hotel

Sit in the sun for ten days

A travel rep to solve all the problems

 

Yes we can sit in the sun on the beech

They have dances and socials at night

We intend to go and see places

No we don't speak Spanish YET !

 

Oh what different lives we lead


© 2018 Wild Rose


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I love the way your poem shows instead of tells (first rule of good writing): ALL people see a vacation very differently! I love all the questions . . . & then later, the answers. Playful realistic details. There's definitely a strong appeal in leaving lots of details to be explored & discovered & worked out. Some people are natural worriers & can't stand uncertainty! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Rose

6 Years Ago

Thanks > Thing is we were travelling to southern Spain alone {lots of stops to check were still on t.. read more
Wild Rose

6 Years Ago

Ups its sent it early - Find the old card (still in date apparently) and make off with that - doesn'.. read more



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changing the point of reference in V5 threw me a bit... had to re-read to understand it is your narrator speaking about the questioners ... other than that i like the format of questions and answers ..in my youth i very much heard and responded to the call of wanderlust .. without plan nor destination many times .. i ended up meeting the most peculiar of people and places ;) your poem reflects the differences we have when it comes to vacations ... planned out or unplanned ... both have their pluses and minuses ..kind of a fun read ... I am in the US and i imagine your travels are much different where you are ... as your closing states :)
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Rose

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and review
Sorry about V5 - writing as I go on & don't read before pos.. read more
Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

sounds like you are having a great adventure as you re-define yourselves in retirement...i think it .. read more
It takes all sorts my friend... I thoroughly enjoyed these words.. so easy to relate to and true... Neville

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

6 Years Ago

May your wheels never buckle my friend....
Wild Rose

6 Years Ago

Our light weight wheels were sold - long time gone

Now they are R225 16 (think 225 an.. read more
Neville

6 Years Ago

well just you take care on them bends..
An exciting way to start retirement. I bet you had a lot of fun in your camper van, visiting new places, and meeting new people.Of course before you go off on an adventure of this sort, there would be a great deal of questions that needed to be asked and answered. I bet you took lots of photographs as well.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Rose

6 Years Ago

We met as cyclist & were away every weekend at YHA's
Then when we married bought a small tent.. read more
I love the way your poem shows instead of tells (first rule of good writing): ALL people see a vacation very differently! I love all the questions . . . & then later, the answers. Playful realistic details. There's definitely a strong appeal in leaving lots of details to be explored & discovered & worked out. Some people are natural worriers & can't stand uncertainty! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Rose

6 Years Ago

Thanks > Thing is we were travelling to southern Spain alone {lots of stops to check were still on t.. read more
Wild Rose

6 Years Ago

Ups its sent it early - Find the old card (still in date apparently) and make off with that - doesn'.. read more
Sounds like a great way to see Spain as a family without ridiculous hotel prices.

What a lovely write about the joys of being together. :):)

V

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Rose

6 Years Ago

I joined the YHA ay 14 YO never liked to be told where to go [supermarket for 4 hours; tourist place.. read more
Verse

6 Years Ago

Exactly right - why live the regimented life when you're retired and trying to break away from all .. read more
This sounds fantastic, getting a camper van and travelling the world. Good on you. More power to you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Rose

6 Years Ago

Thank you Dawn We only go where our wheel can take us Furthest south is Gibraltar
North is Hu.. read more
Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Sounds exciting and amazing to me. Good lucky and great adventures to you both. Dawn.

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Added on September 5, 2018
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Wild Rose
Wild Rose

Lake Disrtict, Cumbria, United Kingdom



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BA (Hons)Management studies Open University Full tech Cert. Marine: Aviation & Industrial Instrumentation and Conrtol Retired engineering lecturer Ex racing cyclist: fell walker: Camper more..

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