Three Blind Mice

Humorous nursery rhyme

Three blind mice

See how they run
They ran after the farmers wife

Never has such a shock in her life

 

She took them to the school for the blind

They were ever so kind

Taught them Braille and gave them white sticks

Have you ever thought you could teach them such tricks

 

Three blind mice

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

Is the second line "the" instead of "they" on purpose?


It's kind of sad no one has asked that yet given the amount of views and reviews.


Kinda makes you wonder if anyone is actually reading anything or just skimming enough to leave generic words of encouragment.

[Wild Rose]

Thank you TKittle I have corrected it typo

I know what you mean Scan reading looking for names etc.

I try to make mine readable > Sometimes you get a huge block of tightly printed text
That is why publishers and some technical works is asked for double spaced lines

[Wyrn Tiger]

Aww so cute. I like mice and reading your stuff is rely nice.

[Wild Rose]

Thank you
I always thought it so cruel to cut off their tails, as in the rhyme
I have a version Hyckery Dickery Dock in my children's file on my PC and on here

[Anna]

Not to repeat the same thing as everyone but yeah, it truly reminds me of nursery rhymes lol. So cute!

[Wild Rose]

Thank you Anna - Yes it has all been said > But pleased to know you like it

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

this is so cute! love it took me back to reading nursery rhymes in an old book as a child with colourful pics handed down from my 4 siblings one by one. love your style

[Wild Rose]

I always (even as a child) thought it was cruel to have their tails cut off
So teach them something useful

[¿]

It reminds my 1st standard rhyme book!!
I used to learn such cute and moral included poem there.....
Ah! This is so cute😊

[Wild Rose]

Thank you > Yes think we all learn this in the nursery
Just a bit of modernisation and humour

[H L Rose]

I like the little twist you've put on this! It's simply cute and lovely. Much enjoyed!

[Wild Rose]

Thanks > I didn't like that she cut off their tails. I thought it cruel

[Joltara]

so cute, i like this nursery rhyme

[Wild Rose]

Thank you > I thought the original was cruel to the poor mice

[sette]

at least they are learning braille such a change

[Wild Rose]

Thanks > Yes better than cutting their tails off.
And they will be able to read

[Ms. Tutolo]

I love how you connected everything together. You managed to take something so simple and make it sound so pretty. write more poems like this!

[Wild Rose]

Thank you > thought they should be brought up to date

[Neville]

You could seriously make something from these little nursery rhyme thingies of yours Wild Rose......... Neville

[Wild Rose]

Do you think so?
Would like to

[Neville]

I do think so... give it a try... who dares wins....N