Hickery Dickery Dock
A Chapter by
Wild Rose
Humorous - Nursery Rhyme
Hickery Dickery Dock
A mouse ran up the
clock
The clock struck six
The mouse ran down
He'd messed his nicks
Hickery Dickery Poo
© 2018 Wild Rose
Reviews
Eh... blah... juvenile and crass in an uncreative way. It's very Adam Sandler-ish of you... and that's not a compliment. Toilet humor is something kids do love but it's for good reason.
Posted 6 Years Ago
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
lol love the messed his nicks hickory dickory poo love it classic! lol
Posted 6 Years Ago
lol love the messed his nicks hickory dickory poo love it classic! lol
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you - I had to think of something funny that kids would take to
Aww!! It's so cute; made my day!
Thanks for sharing!
Posted 6 Years Ago
Aww!! It's so cute; made my day!
Thanks for sharing!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you Anna > Like to make people smile
How fun! You're playing around with nursery rhymes and it is super cute. It might be fun to make a little book of nursery rhymes with your own silly twists on each one.
Posted 6 Years Ago
How fun! You're playing around with nursery rhymes and it is super cute. It might be fun to make a little book of nursery rhymes with your own silly twists on each one.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you
I did have thoughts a bit like Thomas but not a train
6 Years Ago
Ooooh interesting! Roll with it!
6 Years Ago
Puns are awesome
I love how you took a poem we all grew up with and changed it up.
Posted 6 Years Ago
I love how you took a poem we all grew up with and changed it up.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thanks - And still in a form young kids would take to
Thank you for sharing this quick easy poem / rhyme again
Posted 6 Years Ago
Thank you for sharing this quick easy poem / rhyme again
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you > just a bit of a twist
A minute!! It was in my 1st standard textbook!! So glad to read it again😊😊😊
Posted 6 Years Ago
A minute!! It was in my 1st standard textbook!! So glad to read it again😊😊😊
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Its done its job and made you smile _ Also brought back memories
Funny, made me smile. Quite visual too lol.
Posted 6 Years Ago
Funny, made me smile. Quite visual too lol.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thanks > Mt aim was to give smiles to people
6 Years Ago
You gave lots of people smiles
6 Years Ago
Now I know what comedians say
They get pleasure from making people happy and have smiles on .. read more Now I know what comedians say
They get pleasure from making people happy and have smiles on their faces
6 Years Ago
very rewarding
Aw! This made me smile. This was a delight to read. Great read, my friend!
Posted 6 Years Ago
Aw! This made me smile. This was a delight to read. Great read, my friend!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thanks > To make people smile was the aim
Haha this madey day such a nice little poem
Posted 6 Years Ago
Haha this madey day such a nice little poem
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you . An attempt to make people smile
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Added on May 8, 2018
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