Who am I?

Who am I?

A Poem by John

Sinner?

Conceited ?

Vengeful?

A hero?

Self-sacrificing?

Leader?

Abuser?

Coward?

The Devil?

An Angel?

 

I am wronged

             I've been degraded

                    Left alone by the one I love

                                   Fighting the losing battle, winning

I am insane!

I've been to hell and lived

Piece by piece I've reassembled

Never moving, but always gaining ground!

Darkness covered me in brilliant gold

The quiet exploded into a roar

I am human!

I AM ME!

 

© 2008 John


Author's Note

John
Any comments, confusions, criticisms, ect... much appreciated!

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Ah, yet more of your interesting, all around style. I do like the style and the formatting, very unconventional. Have no idea where all these poems are coming from, but keep them coming, I can't see any that don't interest me.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

All those questions...it felt like one I'd written myself. A strong feeling of lost and confused. The second part was mixed with extremes and opposites, that showed a crazy side.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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