Memory

Actually, a song!

i love her so much, but i think i shall go
i cant stand this pain ive never felt before
drowning away into a world of lies
faster and faster i fall into my heart
little by little my world explodes
blackness covers a wasted world
as i put the pieces back inside of me
i cant help to think ive left you behind

all i wanted was to make you happy
but could i do that if i cant make myself smile?
it was too silent all i did was bore you
now im stuck with all my pain........

you are my memory, sealed up inside a wonded soul
all that is left of you, a photograph before you left
and i try to deal with all my demons, but they wont go
i often wonder why i did this to myself
but it only hurts, to think about it, so ill go
little by little, my world explodes
blackness drapes over my wounded soul
as i put the pieces back inside of me
ill remember to let one go

all i wanted was to make you happy
but could i do that if i cant make myself smile?
too much of nothing kept us so apart
and now im left with a poisoned heart
youre not here, but i cant let you go
youre just a memory........ just my memory

i always wondered if you were real
id always think to look beyond you
but now i know that you were real
only after i lost you
but now its my time to go.......
 

my sweet memory, the only thing that kept me.......
my sweet memory, the only one that made me.......
my dead memory, the first to betray me......
my lost memory, my only little dark desire........
and all youll ever be....... has been erased
 

Author's Note

Any comments, confusions, criticisms, ect... much appreciated!

Reviews

[Laura]

First, Thanks for the review John, It was actually inspired a bit by various animes haha. I will reread it and see what words are missings, I tend to do that a lot. Your poem is very good. I saw a few grammatical errors though that I confused me a bit. "it was too silent all i did was bore you" this line confused me a little. Other than that it was a nice piece with a lot of emotion behind it.