The beach

What I think about it...

As I walked along the shore,

There certainly was no war.

I could hear the waves

That went into caves

And then came out

Making a calm shout

The wind would softly push

And the noise would be "Woosh!"

As it would hit the warm sand

I would just stand

Sandcastles may fade away

But the kids would always stay

My soul will always live in that paradise

Were my heart will never freeze to ice

Author's Note

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Reviews

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I do like this :) especially how you have chosen to break up the verses; the words take the reader easily into that beautiful place, then the last line casts us out to feel the coldness of the present; it's very good :)

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Thank u, I'm truly glad u liked :D