The beach

What I think about it...

As I walked along the shore,

There certainly was no war.

I could hear the waves

That went into caves

And then came out

Making a calm shout

The wind would softly push

And the noise would be "Woosh!"

As it would hit the warm sand

I would just stand

Sandcastles may fade away

But the kids would always stay

My soul will always live in that paradise

Were my heart will never freeze to ice

Author's Note

Hope u like it, pls review! :)

Reviews

[Mia]

This is sweet, I enjoyed it!
In the last line you said were...it's meant to be where :)

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Tnx! I'll correct that last bit! :D

[Mia]

No problem :D

[Violet Dreams...]

Nice work Katerina

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Glad u liked it, tnx! :D

[Bluefire]

Amazing!

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Thank u! :)

[Serena]

I like it. The rhyming was good

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Thanks! :D

[Catrina De Maria]

this totally reminded me of a holiday I had with my mum once, when I was 9! This is a great piece of writing! well done
nina xx

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I'm glad u liked it, tnx! :D

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My soul will always live in that paradise

Were my heart will never freeze to ice


ME: WAAAAAAAAAAH! That made me want to melt!!! I love warm summer times and now its getting cold here so yeah that was my favorite line! Lovely poem.

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Thanks, that was my fav line too, I'm glad u liked it :D

[de_maruf]

excellent

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I'm glad u liked it! :)

[kublakhan27]

A walk on the beach can be great for the soul...you captured that feeling very well :)

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:) Thanx!

[kublakhan27]

No problem :)

[Steven Cash]

Like moon said, very nice

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Tnx, glad u enjoyed it! :D

[Steven Cash]

np @ all
(sorry for replying soo late. I had a glitch, and was never able to see you responded til now)

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It's OK :)