The beach

What I think about it...

As I walked along the shore,

There certainly was no war.

I could hear the waves

That went into caves

And then came out

Making a calm shout

The wind would softly push

And the noise would be "Woosh!"

As it would hit the warm sand

I would just stand

Sandcastles may fade away

But the kids would always stay

My soul will always live in that paradise

Were my heart will never freeze to ice

Author's Note

Hope u like it, pls review! :)

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

very nicely Penned I love the Beach I have many writes
about the beach and the ocean It tis a beautiful and calming
sight to see.


Thank you for sharing this lovely piece of work.



Simply beautiful I love it beautiful lines here.



As I walked along the shore,
There certainly was no war.




I could hear the waves

That went into caves

And then came out

Making a calm shout





Blessings. kindred poet

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Thank You I'm Pleased That You Liked The Poem! :3

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're very welcome. it's my Pleasure always. blessings. kindred poet

[Acer]

Very nice piece dear.
>"I could hear the waves
That went into caves..." these two lines are i think powerful, loved these lines indeed.
but the last two lines has outstanding i'd say,

>"My soul will always live in that paradise
Were my heart will never freeze to ice..."

great poem. Great job Katerina.

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Tnx, I'm glad u liked those lines especially the last ones, they are my favourites ^^

[Acer]

Yeah, i loved much indeed, the last lines has really touched me.

[Patrick Henry]

I love it!! I think you said it best in the last two lines in your poem. That second line about there not being war.... stunned!!...... such a definitive stand on where you were going with the direction of mood and that poetess heart of yours that wanted to paint this scene of paradise for us to also enjoy!! You are beautiful and that was fun to read...... Nice job. A great poem to start a smile with!! xoxo -Mark

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Thanks, I was trying to remember my summer in different beaches and the poem just came to me, I'm glad u enjoyed it! :)

[Patrick Henry]

Awesome!! It's very pretty, and kinda has this easy-going resting-upon-a-blanket with a notebook for writing poetry feel to it. lol That was longer than I expected to "hyphen". : ) I love the way you paint and it is as adorable and clear as the poems you write!! xoxo -Your Mark

[zainul]

My soul is enjoying the paradise you have created in this awesome piece.

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:D I'm glad u enjoyed it, tnx!

[zainul]

You are welcome.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Beautiful harmonous, escapism, peace time harmony, so eloquently captured....are you sure you are not a grown up really? Lovely work!

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Nope, but I am going to be 12 on Monday :) Tnx! :D

[SHEEMA HUQ]

WISHING YOU A WONDERFUL 12TH BIRTHDAY FOR MONDAY!

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:D Tnx!

[Miiki]

I personally don't like the beach that much, but you captured all the great things about it. It was a really good poem! 100/100

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Tnx! :D

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

This is such a heart warming poem. It's so light that you can feel it. It makes you smile and imagine yourself walking barefooted in a beach.

I love it :)

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Thanks, I'm glad u found it warming. Makes me imagine that too :D

[Pax]

A soulful calming peace of mind.....great!!!

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Thank u! :D

[PurpleQuartz]

It paints a pretty picture of the beach.
I really enjoyed it.
-Purplequartz

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Thanks! :D

[Allycat]

Short and sweet! I love the ocean, it's one of my favorite places on the earth..so I really enjoyed reading it; felt like I was actually there.
Well done!

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Thank u! :D