Alone

I feel alone

As if I where

On a lonely darkend street

The wind it brushes against me

While the tall buildings they laugh at me

I feel alone and faint

Please do come and help

I feel like a dog without their master

Like a book without letters

Like an oyster without its pearl

Please go rescue me

I have scars which can not be seen

For they are deep inside me

My heart was broken to many times

And my soul felt lonely for too much time

Author's Note

Hope u like it! It expresses my inner feelings. When I started going to school.

Reviews

[Cerise]

Aw... very nicely expressed your emotions..the helplessness,sad,gloomy,despondent and dejected feeling is very nicely told with different examples..god work

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thanks! i'm glad u liked it! :)

[Mia]

Katerina, thank you for sharing your inner most feelings with us. This is beautiful. I hope you feel less lonely. More than that I hope writting this gave you relief.

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Yes it did. I feel much better now but I'm sure I'll get this tommorow when I begin school again. Tnx for reviewing! :D

[Mia]

BIG HUG!!!

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Tnx!

[Mia]

:)

[Serena]

It's an okay poem. I'd come back and reread it in the near future. :)

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Tnx! :)

[Serena]

your welcome

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*drops books drops glasses drops my epic meal time and runs to the rescue*

HELL NO! I'm not letting you feel lonely! *holds your hand* Now let's go GET FOOD AND EAT THE PAIN AWAY! :3 lovely poem, sad though D:

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Tnx! I'm glad u liked it! :)