Alone

I feel alone

As if I where

On a lonely darkend street

The wind it brushes against me

While the tall buildings they laugh at me

I feel alone and faint

Please do come and help

I feel like a dog without their master

Like a book without letters

Like an oyster without its pearl

Please go rescue me

I have scars which can not be seen

For they are deep inside me

My heart was broken to many times

And my soul felt lonely for too much time

Author's Note

Hope u like it! It expresses my inner feelings. When I started going to school.

Reviews

[Beck Louise]

So much emotion just pouring out of this. Love it

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Tnx! Really glad u liked it means alot to me! :)

[Hester Vane]

I think this expresses raw emotion perfectly. Good Job.

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Yes it does express a raw emotion. Tnx for reviewing! :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

For someone so young you write with great expression and emotion Katerina. You will develop into a really good writer as you are good as it is already.

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Tnx for the encouragement! :)

[Cherrie Palmer]

a very complete feeling that is empty, sad and lonely.

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I know it is :( though tnx for reviewing :)

[K-mo]

this is very good, I love that I can feel the way you do by your words, the imagery is great. I just love it

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I'm glad u can! And tnx for reviewing! :)

[Megg]

'A book without letters'. That part really gets to me. Great writing! Keep up the good work.

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I will tnx! :D

[Allycat]

I love this, such an emotional piece. Everyone feels alone sometimes..I agree with Tai, you did an excellent job at expressing yourself and your emotions :)
"I feel like a dog without their master
Like a book without letters
Like an oyster without its pearl
Please go rescue me"
beautiful

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I also liked that part! And tnx for reviewing! :)

[Allycat]

no problem :)

[Tai Ryens]

Such hefty emotions triggered by endless days of eternal writing and heaps of homework! Cough*sarcasm*cough.
Honestly though, I do believe you've expressed yourself well.

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Thnak u! :) *smiles brightly*

[Lehlohonolo Lichaba]

awesome write keep writing

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Thnaks! :D